Murray

1. I believe I have to work on structure, development, and dimension. In most of my writings, I just write whatever comes to my mind at the time and hopes it flows together. I need to work on organizing my work so that is well developed and each subject/topic has supportive details. Dimension is something that is tricky to work with because most essays that are assigned have a minimum word limit and its hard to just read the minimum and when you feel that you have written too much information, you have to be able to cut it down so that the specific are only left.

2. Reading you work aloud does help with the way the writing sounds, you can easily find grammatical errors and be able to place ideas in their proper place.

3. The additional information does influence how I read the quote because helps you understand what Murray is trying to say. It also helps you visualize what the other authors were stating and how their quotes connect to what Murray is trying to say.